camping with carlo rossi:
in which our heroine finds a leech on her ankle and gets falling-down drunk with Tracey at Namekus Lake.
in the consuming dark
I lose both
balance and shoe
tentscape plurality
bodies insulated
possessions encapsulated
carlo
we bested you
you laughed last
when gods awake
they must have
coffee, bacon
oh, duplicitous day
sun-obscuring grey
no match for she-wolves
now it's done
everything points south
for girls and geese
5 Comments:
I didn't see any bars. Or bears. But it was beautiful! Except for the leech. Smells great out there.
Thu Sep 01, 12:56:00 PM
Daily Haiku from you-know-who:
Plummeting stomach
Lifted heart
Tomorrow, my salvation
Inspired by too much information on various blogs.
Thu Sep 01, 03:45:00 PM
...and... thanks for the cold water. It was much needed for my dehydrated ideals....
Thu Sep 01, 08:01:00 PM
umm, you're welcome? who said that? I know you're out there. Thompson, that you?
Thu Sep 01, 10:02:00 PM
I've just learned that the rule for haiku is 5 syllables, 7 syllables, 5 syllables. I don't like rules much, but I guess...
Sat Sep 03, 03:23:00 PM
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